Rough cut and feedback

we showed our video to our fellow classmates as they are also media students we believed that they would be able to give sound judgement of what was a good video and what would be considered as a bad one and the different elements that would play a role in making a sucessful video, we didnt tell them our target audience what we were happy to hear is most of them judged correctly on what our audience would be. Here are some of the comments we recieved:

Positive Comments

• We had very stylish shots.
• The studio shots of me with the microphone was liked, our classmates said they were fond of our various camera angles.
• They thought the lip-syncing was 'perfect'.
• they believed the beginning was extremely good and like how we started our video.

Negative Comments

• Needed more clever editing to match the beat and the footage.
• Add more cuts, to make use of the footage, and to ensure that the audience don't get bored.
• Get rid of unnecessary shadows in the studio shots.
• also we need to illustrate the energy of the song through our video

We believe that the feedback given was overall good and the negatives would only help us to gain the video which we eventually would like to see as our final product